Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Sentence structure using media, their workbooks, and some fun.



The following is an example of a lesson plan that I used for my EL classroom on sentence structure. This is just an example of ways to incorporate the workbook with a lesson the students really needed. I cut and pasted it here, so it may have structural problems. Also I own the school house rock videos, and though the videos are available online, I definitely am  for supporting the people who make these products. I have also cut and pasted information from the core standards from the state websites. This is by no means my own work. We borrow ideas from everywhere, and I have tried to give credit where credit is due.


Sentence Structure Lesson Plan
Audience:  EL classroom
Level: Language Levels 1-3
Lesson Duration: 40 min, daily.
Materials:
·         Writing workbooks
·         Paper
·         Pencils
·         Document camera
·         White board
·         Tablets
·         Teacher’s computer
·         Workbook – Blank Pages Memoirs
Resources:
·          (nouns) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qk4N5kkifGQ
·          (workbook) - www.blankpageswb.blogspot.com
·         (verbs) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=US8mGU1MzYw
·         (subjects & predicates) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fdUXxdmhIsw
·         (adjectives & adverbs) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NkuuZEey_bs
·         (sentence word order) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F03w-vOV-xw&safe=active
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Day One


[1) Planning, Evaluation, and Revision: Pre-write, draft, revise, edit, and publish across the subject areas.
EL.HS.WR.01 Use a variety of strategies to prepare for writing, such as brainstorming, making lists, mapping, outlining, grouping related ideas, using graphic organizers, and taking notes.

Intermediate-Uses writing strategies to prepare for writing such as brainstorming, making lists, mapping, using graphic organizers, and taking notes with peer and teacher support.
Early Intermediate-Uses writing strategies to prepare for writing such as making lists, using graphic organizers with teacher support.
Beginning-Uses a graphic organizer to prepare an illustrated narrative

EL.HS.WR.02 Discuss ideas for writing with classmates, teachers, and other writers, and develop drafts alone and collaboratively.

Intermediate-Brainstorms ideas for writing with classmates, teachers, and other writers, and develops drafts with peer and teacher support.
Early Intermediate -Brainstorms ideas for writing using visual organizers in a teacher-led class activity.
Beginning-Collects and lists vocabulary on a specified topic in a teacher-led class activity

2) Writing Modes: Write narrative, expository, and persuasive texts, using a variety of written forms—including journals, essays, short stories, poems, research reports, research papers, business and technical writing—to express ideas appropriate to audience and purpose across the subject areas.
Personal Narrative

Intermediate -Writes personal narrative by using short phrases and simple sentences with teacher support.
Early Intermediate -Writes personal narrative by using single words, phrases, pictures, and organizers with teachersupport.
Beginning -Writes personal narrative using single words, pictures, and organizers with teacher support.
- Standards By Design: All Grades (ELD) for ELP for ELD –ODE sbd.aspx]






Day one was spent participating in a writing marathon using the writing workbook. This activity consisted of:
1.      A review of the rules of a writing marathon.
2.      The teacher gives a prompt, or gives a prompt from the workbook.
3.      Students date their workbook and begin writing about the prompt.
4.      Writing may be related to the prompt or not as long as it is school – appropriate.
5.      Student pencils must be moving for the duration of the writing time ( 3 minutes).
6.      Writing is not checked, at this time, for spelling or grammatical errors.
7.      After the timer goes off, students are given another prompt and writing continues for 3 minutes.
8.      The process is repeated 4 more times.
9.       The students write continuously for fifteen minutes.
10.  At the conclusion of the writing exercise students shake their hands out and laugh about how they hurt.  Most students seem to enjoy the exercise.
11.  The students highlight sentences they really like in their writing. Each student picks three to highlight and shares at least one out loud.
12.  Students choose their favorite sentence and use it to start a new story. They brain storm with their table groups or in partners depending on the size of the class for three minutes, telling each other what they are going to write about.
13.  They then spend fifteen to twenty minutes writing. 
14.  If there is time afterwards writing is shared.
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Day two:



[EL.HS.WR.05 Use the writing process--prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing successive versions.
Intermediate- Uses the writing process (prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing) with teacher support.
Early Intermediate- Uses the writing process (prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing) to acquire vocabulary and grammatical structures with teacher support.
Beginning- Uses the writing process to acquire vocabulary and grammatical structures with extensive teacher support.

EL.HS.WR.09 Edit and proofread one's own writing, as well as that of others, using the writing conventions, and, for example, an editing checklist or list of rules with specific examples of corrections of specific errors.




Intermediate- Edits and proofreads one's own writing, as well as that of others, with teacher and peer support, an editing checklist, or list of rules with examples of corrections of specific errors.
Early Intermediate-Edits and proofreads one's own writing with teacher and peer support.
Beginning- Edits and proofreads any vocabulary contained in an illustrated project
-- Standards By Design: All Grades (ELD) for ELP for ELD –ODE sbd.aspx]



 Day two is spent editing, proofreading, and rewriting student stories. This is a mostly an independent work, to allow them to use their writing as a formative assessment.  Although writing and proofreading sheets are posted and they have their workbooks, the students should not focus on fixing issues they cannot catch on their own. General expectations are discussed before they begin.  The students and instructor make a list together of things they have had lessons on, that they should be able to recognize.  Students are encouraged to read their stories out loud and listen for errors. The instructor volunteers to read what they have written so they can listen to another person read it. Many students use a translation program on their tablets to look up English words.
Day Three
If it is determined, usng the exercises generated in the writing workbooks, that students are having a problem with sentence structure and/ or basic word order the following exercise can be done.


[Sentence Structure - The basic sentence structures that we use to express needs and likes are foundations of the more complex sentence structure we use for academic purposes.
EP.BG.01 Beginning - One-or two-word answers (nouns or yes/no) to questions about preferences,(e.g., two, apples,or tree)

EP.EI.01 Early Intermediate - Simple sentences with subject/verb/object. “I like/don’t like _____(object).
I need a/some _____ (object).”

EP.IN.01 Intermediate - Elaborated sentences with subject/verb/object
Nouns, Pronouns, and Adjectives - Students learn to understand and generate oral and written language with nouns, pronouns, and adjectives.

EP.BG.02 Beginning - Common nouns and adjectives

EP.EI.02 Early Intermediate -  Simple sentences with the verb to be, using common nouns and adjectives. “The (my, her) ______ is/are _______. A (it) has/have _________.”

EP.IN.02 Intermediate - Elaborated sentences has/have/had or is/are/were with nouns and adjectives
- Standards By Design: All Grades (ELD) for ELP for ELD –ODE sbd.aspx]

 

1.      Begin with the topic Sentences.  Draw a basic Cornel Notes chart on flip chart paper in front of the class.  Write the title “Sentences” on the paper. (Each time something is written on the master paper, pause for the class to quickly copy the notes onto their papers and parrot the information verbally back to the instructor. Notes may use words or pictures.

2.      Put the main idea nouns on the master paper. Ask the class to explain what a noun is, and write their definitions in the notes area of the Cornel paper. If the students have not added this comment add the note,” Could be the subject of a sentence”. Play the school house rock video on nouns: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qk4N5kkifGQ
After the video have each student identify three nouns.
3.      Third put the main idea verbs on the master paper repeating the process used with nouns.  Use the School House Rock video for verbs: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=US8mGU1MzYw
After the video have each student demonstrate an action and tell the word for the action.
Review changing a noun to a verb by adding “ing”, because it was in the video.
4.      Explain that, in a sentence, one of the nouns is a subject- who or what the sentence is about.  The verb or action in the sentence is also called the predicate- what the subject does. Use several simple sentences as examples.

Watch the school house rock video on subjects and predicates: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fdUXxdmhIsw  . After the video, choose one of the sentences in it and write it down underlining and labeling the subject and the predicate.

Watch the Tale of Mr. Morton again and have them to write down two of the sentences that they heard and label the subject and predicates. Share the sentences they had discovered.
5.      Repeat this process with two more parts of speech: Adjectives and Adverbs-and practice finding them as we went.
6.      Reinforce what the students hear with the Cornel notes and verbal practice.

7.      Watch a video about the five basic sentence structure patterns in English. Write notes as the video progresses and encourage the students to keep up with their own notes.  Pause the video between each main idea and practice writing a sentence mimicking the pattern presented.  Stress word order, in English sentences are in subject+verb+object order.

Day Four-
On day four:
1.      Review the videos and notes from day three for the first half of class.

2.      Watch the videos again while following their notes and asking questions.

3.      Have each student give three sentences which are labeled on the board.

4.      Review a paragraph and label one of the sentences in it with class help.

5.      Get out writing from Day 2 and have the students underline the subject and the predicate in each sentence. Explain that they will get extra points if they can number the sentence pattern using their Cornel notes from day three.

6.      Help students when they find sentences that they cannot identify where the subject and/or the predicate are.

7.      At the end of the class have each student pick three sentences that they fixed to share with the class using the document camera.

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September Blank Pages- Memoirs

Blank Pages is series of writers workbooks each over a 100 pages long. The workbooks are designed as graphic organizers to help you get started writing, so that you aren't looking at a blank page. I hate starting on a blank page, so I have taken them away. There will be a total of 13 workbooks; one for each month of the year plus a thirteenth illustrator workbook. Each month features a different type of writing and does not have to be done in the month it designates. In fact we encourage you to break the rules and write in them when ever you want to. We aren't even going to release them on the right months.

Septembers will be the first to be released and will probably come out in two weeks in May. It is being edited now, so the countdown begins! A team of writers from 12 years old to 65 are exploring it's pages and practicing writing in it now, and it's not September! We are going to start displaying the pages we are filling out here. Scanning them in and letting you get a sneak peek at what the workbooks have to offer.

September is all about Memoirs. It is designed with three pages per day of the month giving writers multiple activities and prompts. With over 100 pages of writing activities you won't be able to complete it in a month. Good thing it doesn't have to be done in September.Each day has journaling space in addition to random prompts, activities, and writing quotes. Each week has at least one illustrating or art activity. After you work your way through the workbook, there are bonus pages in the back to help you format, revise, and edit so that you can finish at least one project each month. I have also listed my favorite writing sites and hints. Go ahead and steal the prompts off of pages we scan in to get you started writing. Just please don't take our stories. The workbooks are black and white and give writers room to doodle and fill them out. Remember that our sample pages are filled out by writers of every age and ability.

As a k-12 school teacher this workbook is written to the core standards and designed to be used in my classroom with students and in my critique and writing clubs with adults. Teachers we will be offering lesson plans and class disks if you want a format you can print out instead of individual workbooks, just let me know what you need.